Plans for Improvements

Firstly I have created another draft of the video. I kept the argument, getting ready and bathroom scene the same but then cut out Georgy from the band and cut out her narrative part. This means that the rest of the video is band for 2 minutes which could be boring, but I cut shots of the band and long shots of the crowd with close ups of Joe, side shots of the band, and close ups of the band and instruments to mix it up and make it more visually exciting. I also have more footage planned to film on Thursday with 2 of the band members. For the very start of the first chorus I plan on filming shots of the room setting up. This will include fast stop motion of the flags appearing one by one, the parts of the drums appearing, and the other instruments appearing. This will make it more interesting, create a better atmosphere and show more of our skills. I also intend to make set lists and include close ups of these, beer bottles, cigarettes etc - just items in the room in order to create a more gig style atmosphere.I'm also going to attempt to film girls dancing to mix in with the footage to show people having fun at the gig.